Crit request: The Web Between Life and Death http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16979032/crit-request:the-web-between-life-and-death Posts in the discussion thread "Crit request: The Web Between Life and Death" - Where do things go after they are destroyed? Can what is done be undone? Mon, 17 Aug 2026 01:46:10 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16979032#post-6719780 Crit request: The Web Between Life and Death http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16979032/crit-request:the-web-between-life-and-death#post-6719780 Sat, 26 Oct 2024 23:35:45 +0000 TempestRaven 8992746 I finished this draft a while ago, but I'm not sure whether or not it's good enough to post. It isn't necessarily a final draft, and I'll happily accept any advice or critique.
Here's the link (it's the first story in the sandbox):
TempestRaven's Roost

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