Comments for page "The Highway’s Gullet" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659/the-highways-gullet Posts in the discussion thread "The Highway’s Gullet" Thu, 11 Jun 2026 16:32:41 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659#post-6768655 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659/the-highways-gullet#post-6768655 Tue, 07 Jan 2025 04:02:52 +0000 Snapdragon133 5193476 The colored text was a sick touch. At first when I finished reading this, I reacted negatively towards the idea that the other characters were doomed to the crowd. Taking it literally, it really doesn't sound that justified of a fate (especially Herman, #HermanDidNothingWrong) but I think I appreciate the metaphor its going for. I think the piece definitely could've benefited from some sharpening of its metaphors so they all feel more pointed towards the same central theme, but what's here has some great emotion behind it. Re-contextualizing "my place" at the end there was very nice mwah chef's kiss.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659#post-6765362 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659/the-highways-gullet#post-6765362 Wed, 01 Jan 2025 23:37:26 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 This is such a fun piece. Loved the interactions between the many characters, and the overall feel (Thanks to the colored text) that something was very, very wrong about the developing event.

All in all, I liked this one. +1~

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659#post-6765113 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17014659/the-highways-gullet#post-6765113 Wed, 01 Jan 2025 12:21:40 +0000 stellyfins 8414632 Let it be known that my native southeast asian ass has never been to Kansas.

This is my Yuletide Gift for Jaxim0sPr1meJaxim0sPr1me!!! I’m very very proud of the concept, not so much of the execution.

Some big inspirations were
- 24 Hours (Sandman Comics)
- Mouthwashing
But as you all can tell I got pretty liberal with it. Cheers!

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