Comments for page "Beasts of the Desert Part I" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i Posts in the discussion thread "Beasts of the Desert Part I" Fri, 13 Mar 2026 02:35:08 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6969610 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6969610 Sun, 04 May 2025 18:15:38 +0000 rumetzen 209204 I dig this. Though I'm not generally a fan of straightforwardly worldbuildy stuff, the style and tone does well for this. Personally, I would like to see the oddness of the language and narrator pushed even further. +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6933351 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6933351 Tue, 22 Apr 2025 15:09:05 +0000 Arclund 8107583 I'm glad you liked all of it, happy to see that it landed.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6932402 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6932402 Mon, 21 Apr 2025 21:12:02 +0000 zipzipskins 5558639 up front i want to say that i copied all four entries of your bestiary into my workspace while i was writing my sand tracks piece. i think there's so much here that's creative, that makes the ecology of the world feel extremely alive. you do a really excellent job balancing details and worldbuilding with voice and charm. the details you do select feel really intentional and give a strong sense of everything about this world feeling really alien and different — nothing in any of the four parts is just a reskin of something else i recognize, it's all interlocking unique parts. really great and my piece owes this series a debt, so thank you for making it. +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6912225 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6912225 Mon, 07 Apr 2025 21:59:52 +0000 Arclund 8107583 Thank you!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6910482 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6910482 Sat, 05 Apr 2025 10:38:26 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 I quite like the world building here, it's doing the important work of laying the groundwork for the canon while remaining interesting and compelling in its own right. Good stuff!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6870308 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6870308 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 22:00:22 +0000 Arclund 8107583 Thank you, hopefully the next three sections continue that trend!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6870197 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6870197 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 20:55:27 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 despite not really being interested in the worldbuilding, i found this to be a lively, engaging read. the narrative voice is fun, and watching the narrator spin little stories about each creature is delightful.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962#post-6865471 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17065962/beasts-of-the-desert-part-i#post-6865471 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 03:52:46 +0000 Arclund 8107583 Come sit by the fire and learn of the beasts of this vast land, we begin close at home and amongst the towering peaks of the Reach, with more to come~

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