Comments for page "Poem for a Bar in the Shadows" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986/poem-for-a-bar-in-the-shadows Posts in the discussion thread "Poem for a Bar in the Shadows" Tue, 09 Jun 2026 08:41:29 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986#post-6887858 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986/poem-for-a-bar-in-the-shadows#post-6887858 Thu, 20 Mar 2025 17:03:04 +0000 xexnoncores 9159226 really good work. love the way this feels and reads

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986#post-6886639 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986/poem-for-a-bar-in-the-shadows#post-6886639 Wed, 19 Mar 2025 00:33:40 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 this is much improved on the version i crit in your dms. you've taken most of the parts that didn't quite do it for me and fashioned them into stanzas with quite a bit of punch; to steal a phrase from bukowski, every line is packed with a delicious little juice. good work.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986#post-6886630 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17072986/poem-for-a-bar-in-the-shadows#post-6886630 Wed, 19 Mar 2025 00:04:42 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 ty to uc for crit

I wrote this on the l-shaped vinyl couch of my favorite bar while a queer indie band played great music. It was great and my bartender gave me a free soda. love yall.

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