http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17088481/a-tale-of-two-monsters Posts in the discussion thread "A Tale of Two Monsters" Fri, 12 Jun 2026 17:34:45 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17088481#post-6914380 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17088481/a-tale-of-two-monsters#post-6914380 Wed, 09 Apr 2025 13:32:58 +0000 Crow-Cat 3952131 I apologize for that. I tried rewriting to fix those issues, but found I was struggling to go through with it. I realized it was making the story into something I didn’t want to write.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17088481#post-6913153 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17088481/a-tale-of-two-monsters#post-6913153 Wed, 09 Apr 2025 08:00:19 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 the issues plilt and i raised in crit mostly still apply, unfortunately. some nice descriptions, though.

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