Comments for page "end of time" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time Posts in the discussion thread "end of time" Mon, 17 Aug 2026 02:17:18 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163#post-7052183 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time#post-7052183 Sat, 28 Jun 2025 14:40:30 +0000 Stygian Blue 7679669 As I said before: pleasing. a summer picnic looking up at winter arourae. Light black tea.

-Styg

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163#post-7050097 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time#post-7050097 Wed, 25 Jun 2025 22:51:24 +0000 20minutespast 8114277 noted and removed, since i just made an author page to link to all my stuff

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163#post-7049383 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time#post-7049383 Tue, 24 Jun 2025 18:47:33 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 seeing as i think this now stands on its own, i question the value of the crosslink, but i do enjoy bringing the marbles into this. the last few lines also remain killer.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163#post-7049127 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time#post-7049127 Tue, 24 Jun 2025 10:51:39 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 While the imagery here is really strong, it feels very *bumpy*. The core of this poem is a repetition that feels somewhat stiff, and while I admire the intention it falls flat. Good imagery and good words!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163#post-7048495 an insomniac's lullaby http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17158163/end-of-time#post-7048495 Mon, 23 Jun 2025 09:48:29 +0000 20minutespast 8114277 a sequel and a rewrite, surely not??!!

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