Comments for page "lashes" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes Posts in the discussion thread "lashes" Wed, 20 May 2026 23:18:41 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7083072 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7083072 Thu, 24 Jul 2025 17:47:08 +0000 Snapdragon133 5193476 Wow this is very extremely good. Underrated. This poems summons feelings of youth and not understanding how the world works, where whatever you do it results in disappointment - and the disappointment is palpable here, it feels like the narrator hates us for existing - and biting into hands. Fascinated with the two times your shirt becomes your hands or somehow resists them. I also want to chime in with Sloth and say "bad choice, buddy!" along with many of the same ilk rocked because they assist the feeling of being talked down to. Amazing! Easy +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7076505 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7076505 Sun, 20 Jul 2025 17:42:43 +0000 A Machine for Sloths 7113260 I completely agree with uncanny's characterization of "like a raw nerve", and completely disagree with his appraisal of the line he quoted: I think that line was a fantastic choice and is a great addition to the poem's overall tone. it is very much a facet of the way in which the poem speaks directly to the reader in much the same way as a thought speaks directly to the thinker. very well-written and easy +1.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7063410 Poetry is always great! http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7063410 Thu, 10 Jul 2025 00:06:08 +0000 5341612 I don't fully understand this, but I love it anyway. Great use of stanzas. I'll have to reread it later.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7062970 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7062970 Wed, 09 Jul 2025 13:54:39 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 Wonderful words and the meaning slams into me like a truck. Fabulous. The eyelashes and phlegm but really hit it for me.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7062475 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7062475 Wed, 09 Jul 2025 04:26:55 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726

bad choice, buddy!

i don't like this line but the rest of this is very good. like a raw nerve.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732#post-7062289 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-17163732/lashes#post-7062289 Wed, 09 Jul 2025 01:03:43 +0000 Spoddetman 6701589 middle school sucked

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