I'm also working on a guide to elementals, that with permission I would put in the same book as On Demons.

You're free to do so, or to add your own book. In fact you can add to any book you like, so long as it fits. If it doesn't seem to fit, then someone from staff may move it or ask you to move it.

You can look here at the Index for descriptions of most of the books here. ("The Spirit World" isn't on there, I see - I'll ask Lumancer about that.)

And an appearance by their -I assume- leader who also goes by initials:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/incident-report-x23

Several stories during game day part 2 involved Serpent's Hand operatives, and two -so far- have taken place inside the library:
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/gamedaypart2index

I've accepted The Serpent's Upraised Middle Finger into my own personal cannon::
http://www.scp-wiki.net/a-s-s-and-other-low-threat-groups-of-interest

And I also look forward to seeing it

I'm also working on a guide to elementals, that with permission I would put in the same book as On Demons.

Well, after I'm done writing the whole thing.

Gets better as they get down.

This right here means that you need to cut down on a whole lot of the material in the draft you've written. (I need to do the same thing in plenty of what I write, though, so I sympathize…)

Conciseness is something I have a problem with; I can never tell if i'm over-explaining things. So thanks, I'll get right on it after I write the paper I have due tomorrow.

At the time of this writing professor Atkins had been cursed by a Michelle Davisburg non-lingual memetic enchantment (known incorrectly as the wanderers hex), possibly transmitted through a complex pattern of finger and eyebrow manipulation. Lost in the midwestern United States, he was compelled by the enchantment to travel in the opposite direction last indicated to He maintained enough lucidity to jury rig a workable inverted guide charm that would pull him in random "safe" directions. Unfortunately his alignment was off and the locations he visited would better fit the definition of secluded, unknown, or, in some cases, intentionally hidden.

…could be much better if you cut it down to this:

At the time of this writing professor Atkins had been cursed by a Michelle Davisburg non-lingual memetic enchantment (known incorrectly as the wanderers hex), possibly transmitted through a complex pattern of finger and eyebrow manipulation.

Plus a sentence about the journal recovery, and you're set. The rest of that information you can work into the story itself. (This is ignoring the typos in that sentence. :P)

And rethink some of the references to magic. I don't mind them, but I would also like stuff that's less expected. If you're going to have mages and magic in there, make it your own. (Think Gears' "Book of Ur", with its fascinating take on classic fantasy magic.)

It's a long way from done, and this is the rough coarse draft.

This is awesome.

Now make sure it's good. ;d

Aside from the fact that you should probably fix the capitilization of the headings, I like it.

This is in no way finished, I just wanted someone elses opinion on it's tone. I like the thought that the Hand would hire proffessors, and publish scientific articles like Genii Loci, but I also felt that a realistic "new speicies" report would be boring.

And I like it, personally.

Link the page you make here when you'd like a review and one or more of us will tell you what we think. :)

The first idea sounds particularly intriguing.

• A log of encounters from the point of view of members of the Serpent's Hand. Currently working on one in which someone encounters skinwalkers in ruins in the middle of the desert.
• Nigerian lava cats- basically, a cat with a rock shell that absorbs heat and converts it into energy

Bright: The Little Sisters sounds like a fascinating idea. Are you still planning on putting that up?

A book containing events recorded by a victorian collector of curiosities. Gothic horror, steampunk, weird weird west, that sort of thing. Basically a book for "period" stuff.

The Shadow Market: A marketplace set up Elsewhere where the Minders sell things. The buildings are ramshackle, crooked, and much too close together, as though they're conspiring and whispering to one another. Marshall, Carter and Dark have agents here. You can buy many things here, and you can lose even more.

There's a house in Nebraska where it's never midnight.

And what to say at close of day, as I bow my head?
The flowers bloom before the tomb of these, the righteous dead.