http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489/words Posts in the discussion thread "Words" Tue, 08 Sep 2026 13:17:14 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489#post-4710706 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489/words#post-4710706 Mon, 06 Jul 2020 01:18:46 +0000 5341612 I am in agreement with Old Rum (or younger Rum, should I say?), except for the fact that poetry is one of my specialties. It doesn't do so well at the start, and while it eventually coalesces into a message the the end, I feel like hinting at more conflict would create a better progression of images, and thus a better page.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489#post-1658502 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489/words#post-1658502 Wed, 19 Dec 2012 00:10:15 +0000 rumetzen 209204 Meh. I'm not a huge poetry guy, I've just never been able to derive any enjoyment from it unless it was really interesting, which this isn't. Plus the writing stumbled at a few points. No vote for now.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489#post-1657516 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489/words#post-1657516 Tue, 18 Dec 2012 13:37:00 +0000 RJB_R 1229263 This article has been placed up for review, please take the time to rate/read/review if you have not already done so.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489#post-1502032 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-518489/words#post-1502032 Sun, 08 Jul 2012 12:30:30 +0000 thedeadlymoose 732274 Doctor van de M___, don't forget to announce your new stories here!

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