http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917/opinion-on-draft Posts in the discussion thread "Opinion on draft" Fri, 17 Jul 2026 02:00:13 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917#post-1702885 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917/opinion-on-draft#post-1702885 Mon, 04 Feb 2013 19:46:21 +0000 Vivax 1492378 I agree with Jack. There isn't enough here for me to actually help you with.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917#post-1702878 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917/opinion-on-draft#post-1702878 Mon, 04 Feb 2013 19:35:26 +0000 Jack Manganese 1486408 It's very short and filled with run-on sentences. You should flesh it out a bit. Maybe give us some background on this character, or some other reason to care about him.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917#post-1702793 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-621917/opinion-on-draft#post-1702793 Mon, 04 Feb 2013 17:22:51 +0000 MysteriousMan 1544402 I posted this draft on the sandbox the other day and I want to know what people think of it
here's the link http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/myseriousman

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