A Monologue http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783/a-monologue Posts in the discussion thread "A Monologue" - link to sandbox in thread Fri, 17 Jul 2026 01:37:31 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783#post-1898996 Re: A Monologue http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783/a-monologue#post-1898996 Fri, 22 Nov 2013 13:02:10 +0000 Bunton 1225550 I share Trar's sentiment. It's very interesting for what it is, but I the final line ("it's the same with us and gods") feels almost like an anticlimax. I think, for this to stand on its own, that needs to be expanded out. Otherwise, it is interesting, but too brief, since the bulk of it is written as pre-amble.

I mean, how is it like us and gods? Which gods? Has this sort of thing happened before? How could we act against them? What are your gods (the ones you have in mind for the purposes of this story, not the ones you personally hold) like?

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783#post-1898709 Re: A Monologue http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783/a-monologue#post-1898709 Fri, 22 Nov 2013 05:34:11 +0000 Trar 1559079 Who convinced you? IMO, it needs a bit more to be postable. But that's just me.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783#post-1898511 A Monologue http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-730783/a-monologue#post-1898511 Thu, 21 Nov 2013 23:51:39 +0000 Todd_Ingram 1258032 http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/todd-ingram-s-sandbox

Originally, I had wanted this to be an intro to something, but I was convinced that it could stand on its own.

What do you think?

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