Comments for page "Found Across The Sea"

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Thu, 24 Apr 2025 19:22:39 +0000

overall i enjoyed this. i think conceptually it's extremely strong, and i think it builds vibes in a compelling way. the story is pretty tightly crafted. that said, at times it feels really dry, which sometimes is important for the vibes and the narrator's voice, but also sometimes crosses the line into feeling a bit too spare, and i wish there were more imagery and that you had filled some things out in more places. i also thought the transition from present tense to past tense midway through the piece was jarring — that sort of thing always feels like whiplash to me, and it definitely did here.

anyway, the strength of the conceit and of the storytelling are enough for an upvote, and i'm glad you linked it to me in discord, because otherwise i never would have read it

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Sat, 08 Aug 2020 09:35:17 +0000

This is awesome

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Thu, 14 May 2020 04:19:32 +0000

Now with some cool little divider images by GhostChibi!

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Mon, 28 Nov 2016 13:46:31 +0000

help, I'm scouring through your stuff for secret santa ideas and I'm suddenly feeling veeery veeery inadequate

in all seriousness this is a good fucking read, underrated, ten outta ten, better than loafs

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Sun, 10 May 2015 02:50:04 +0000

This was compelling.

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Fri, 14 Feb 2014 04:38:39 +0000

Wow, this was really good. The ending was brilliant. I still feel like this could be its own universe. One in which everyone gets 10,000 steps to live. I liked it anyway. +1 for a good story with a great conclusion.

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Fri, 14 Feb 2014 03:08:35 +0000

8177 words. I think this may be the longest single article on WL? Not sure. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it.

Backstory: This was inspired by a Pathfinder game, when the conversation got around the to the idea of rolling a 1d100 every time you took a step, and dying on a 1.