Idea, idea, idea :D

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Idea on a tale I could write

Idea, idea, idea :D

Hamson one 16 Dec 2019 00:09

Hi!
I had an idea on a tale of a kid who lives out in a forest full of wonders and writes on about what they see.
Thats the basic idea, any more ideas that could work for this site

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Re: Idea, idea, idea :D

rumetzen 16 Dec 2019 00:12

This seems like a fine start but it's really hard to give feedback on something with such a low level of detail. Elaborating more would be good. Why is he there? What kind of wonders?

Re: Idea, idea, idea :D

Hamson one 17 Dec 2019 04:03

I was thinking on making the forest like be on a mid point of sorts
A place where nothing is born or ever dies.A place that is hidden yet exposed

Some things in the forest:

• The forest trees are made of crystal like leaves, despite being crystally looking when its leaves fall it doesn't break, they aren't very fragile and its doesn't make fires when exposed to sunlight. They are really pretty, glassy and colorful. Most of the tree's here are really high.
• There's a river that crosses through the forest and it end's on a lake. The river has healing properties that all of course deposit on the lakes.
• The animals that are there have lived there for a loong time but they never seemed to have aged. Many of the animals that live there have adapted to the habitat of the forest.
• One of the most notable vegetation in the forest are the bells flowers which seem to be the only vegetation that can be grown. The bells flowers make a melodic noice when theres wind.
• People who've entered there can't leave unless they've passed there for as long as their age was when they entered. They remain the age they were when they entered (Ex. if you entered the forest when you are 18 years old you'll have to be there for 18 years and when you come out you'll be the same age you where when you entered)
• The forest seems to be eternal but it does has a limit, going south and you'll find a random door and thats the end of the forest

The kiddo who's there (Let's call him Allistor) entered when he was 16 years old. Currently he's 1 year more to go out of the forest.

Thats about it for now. What do y'all think?

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