First time posting here. Hope some of you enjoy this little piece i’ve made as a “presentation card”. Huge thanks to Avelon for helping me in the Discord!
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(account deleted)This is REALLY good dude, keep up the good work.
Don't shitpost on the forums. You're running real close to a ban, my guy.
Sorry, just making sure I wasn’t banned
(I atleast want to be part of one site before I delete my account)
The ending is very narmy but the flow is strong and it's an interesting piece. Good work!
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
Yeah, i was a bit worried that the ending was "narmy", as you said, but i decided to let it unchanged since no one who read it said something specifically about that part. I'll take it to account next time. Thanks for the opinion and the new word!
Yeah I like this a lot. The ending definitely balances on the edge of eye-roll-y self-indulgence, but I think the strength of writing in the rest of it keeps it on the right side of narm. An excellent bit of writing overall :)
Really fun short poem. I like the energy of this one a lot.
+1~
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