The Jelly Bean Incident / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page The Jelly Bean Incident.

Rounderhouse 18 Jul 2020 22:46

A bit rough around the edges, meanders in places, but overall I liked it!

Avelon21 08 Aug 2020 18:40

This needs a lot of polishing up, which you could've gotten help with in the review forums. It was interesting overall, but it wasn't really concise enough to have an impact by the end.

Whitehills 08 Aug 2020 21:32

I was a little confused at first, but your way of writing got me hooked immediately, it's kinda short though - really left me craving to see more :')

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-Wanderheil