The Black Hole File / Discussion

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Author's Note

ZeroMan 23 Jan 2021 23:22

Despite you, tomorrow’s gonna be another day
I’ll still pay to see the garden bloom
Just like you didn’t want it to
You’ll be bitter, seeing the day rise without asking for your permission
And I’ll die laughing, knowing this day will come
Way faster than you think

My first english article, and it's for the Wanderer's Library! Despite being a bit rough because it's a jam, I'm really proud of this piece, and I like the characters I made. Hopefully I'll be able to work with them again in the future!

Thank you lulatred for all the crit and just being a great friend all around.

Last edited on 24 Jan 2021 03:21 by ZeroMan Show more

Snapdragon133 25 Jan 2021 19:55

I wouldn't have been able to tell you wrote in a different language before this piece, cause it all seemed so well done. I definitely expected this to go a different way, not that the speaker was the murderer but maybe he was in an abusive home and this was a therapy of some sort? Very cool

ZeroMan 25 Jan 2021 20:05

😳

Thank you very much! Hahah, your comment made my day :)

Gabriel McQueen 27 Jan 2021 03:57

Wonderfully dream-like, and I liked that for a moment near the end, I wasn't sure which of the characters was going to be the one to awake from the dream.

ZeroMan 22 Apr 2021 02:33

Thanks a lot! I'm really glad I managed to give off that impression, that was exactly what I wanted.