The Theft of the Ocean's Heart / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page The Theft of the Ocean's Heart.

DrLucis 07 Jul 2021 20:40

How you doing, CadaverCommander? This has a very tightly knit pacing and an engaging narrative. There are many parts I liked about this article. One thing that stood out was the blue background. It really suited the story. In addition, I really liked out the world ended when the Thief stole the Heart. Overall, I enjoyed this article and hope to see more from you.

Yours truly,

Dr. Lucis, aka THE BISEXUAL GOD OF LIGHT

Maxyfran73 17 Jan 2023 00:10

Possibly one of my favorite pieces on this site already. The flow was like a storm, constant but rapid, not wasting a single breath, not a single word. The characters were amazing, despite being extremely archetypical, and just about every single action, every single moment at which the Thief outsmarted the King, every piece of worldbuilding exploring through small motions and nothing else… God, it was perfect.

Yeah, that's it. It's simply perfect. Easy +1

zipzipskins 23 Dec 2023 18:31

i want more. more at this pace, more with this world. +1