Visit to the Diviner / Discussion

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Whitehills 01 Sep 2021 22:01

"Unsettlingly though, each of the stars appeared to his other senses to be watching him, like billions of eyes staring at his soul."
Chills.
(Not a typo, and I'm just horrible at reading.)
Anyway, I'll admit I was having a lot of trouble following at first? but at the end of the article everything clicked nicely, the Divine may mock the destroyer for he was supposed to be nothing but a nameless mortal, but I'd say it's quite impressive that despite that, he has managed to get as far as he has (even if his accomplishments are just murder and destruction.)

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-Wanderheil

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Maxyfran73 01 Sep 2021 23:37

This was an odd read; the theme took its time to get there, but it was a very satisfying read altogether. The Ethos and the ending were really good. The writing felt counterintuitive at parts, more obtuse than poetic. Part of it was the use of commas during some of the dialogue, elongating sentences too much such that one loses what the sentence was about in the first place.

Other than that, this was a really good read, playing with a rather interesting concept. +1

rumetzen 29 Aug 2022 02:44

This is pretty dope for a lot of reasons.