Cont. on Pg. 13 / Discussion

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Uh oh guys the flowerboy is getting sentimental

Snapdragon133 10 Sep 2021 18:32

Now that we're nearing the end of the con, I just wanted to thank my wonderful teammates, we had a lot of fun putting both Duke and R'lek together as real characters, and I hope they stick around in your Library for some time. Good luck to all the other teams!

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Whitehills 11 Sep 2021 02:41

Duke is the only character who'd throw his drugs to his chaser's face as a distraction, hshshs, I love him, just like I loved this chase scene ;P +1

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-Wanderheil

Maxyfran73 14 Sep 2021 02:41

God this has been such a fun adventure, I love Duke and these shenanigans of his. The writing is impeccable and, well, he's a disaster in a really fun manner. Also like R'lek; the plan he pulled here was neat.

This has been a really good story to follow. +1~

UncertaintyCrossing 14 Sep 2021 22:26

Love these chaotic idiots and the adventures they go on. Definitely hoping to see them in more stuff after the contest! They're wonderful characters and again, I love how real they feel with their emotions and the kind of conversations/experiences they're having. Keep up the good work! +1

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But the time flies, irretrievable.

Rounderhouse 19 Sep 2021 01:26

#10

Short, but doesn't outlast its welcome. Don't have a ton to say about this one given its length and pacing but it's a fun little thing and a competently written action scene, which can be surprisingly hard to do sometimes. Definitely enjoying the Adventures of Lizard Wizard and Psycho Mantis;+1.

Nylo 26 Oct 2023 22:19

This ties in well with how Duke has been depicted so far.

The whole project has reached a good path, both in its consistency and contradictions alike.

I like how the solution to the problem at hand is quite simplistic, and how R'lek has the upper hand, proving he's a professional. The description of the guard also works rather well, giving her a side-character status, almost. She's good at her job. If this was a game or film, I'd actually doubt there was plot armor involved lol

My favorite piece of prose: "The presenter interrupted our whispered argument, similar to how I wanted to interrupt R'lek's life processes at the moment"

+1

All the best

- Nylo

destinysday 10 Nov 2025 18:10

Coming back to comment on this: it was fun! R'lek and Duke have a great chemistry here and the writing is classic Duke material. Well done