A world of dogs / Discussion

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Whitehills 11 Sep 2021 03:05

If this is the end, I will probably cry, I need more of the angsty lizard, overly-honest man That said, this was cool, you could really feel Duke's anger and how much he hates his job. I think the angry parts are what I've liked the most about this series, they pull me in, it's a big strong emotion that feels so liberating and so wrong at the same time, and you guys write them down and capture that feeling perfectly, I could really just read this stuff for hours and keep wanting more.

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-Wanderheil

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Seraphannim 11 Sep 2021 11:33

Oh man, that was so sweet! Thank you so much for your kind words, me and my team really apreciate it ;v;
And worry not, even if we do not win the contest, we might have more things planned for him, Duke was so well received that this definitely won't be the last article coming out of his mouth.

Maxyfran73 14 Sep 2021 04:45

Fuck, this was good. I like this epilogue-like ending: Barely a thing about the auction, which both helps the Gonzo aspect of things, and, well, the fact that we already know what happened. The raw feeling of this article is also constructed really well; we learn all about Duke (Or at least we learn enough.)

Overall, this was an amazing journey: Extremely premature to say, it's the first author I read and fully finished their works of, but Duke has to be my favorite author for this contest. Outstanding work from Team Fear and Loathing, really.

UncertaintyCrossing 14 Sep 2021 22:30

Echoing the previous two comments. Was a good conclusion for this set of tales, though I'm happy to see you have more planned for this motley crew of characters. Keep up the good work, team!

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But the time flies, irretrievable.

Rounderhouse 19 Sep 2021 01:43

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A suitable cap-off to the adventure of Raoul Duke Gathers. The direct written feel of it works well, I can definitely visualize something of this vein in an op-ed section. I like it, though it suffers from the same problem of a few stilted, unnatural sounding sentences that could use another look=through. Interested in reading the epilogue, whenever it should release!