The Totem in Air / Discussion

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Elenee FishTruck 12 Sep 2021 02:54

Pligmolon gang

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Rounderhouse 14 Sep 2021 01:24

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Continuing from your start, the imagery and sheer aura on display here is truly nuts. It's… I wouldn't say it's surreal literature, but you're definitely approaching the point where the actual content of each sentence and clause matters less in terms of the overall atmosphere of the piece. So far, what I'm gleaning is that we're exploring parts of a world after humanity has hit the tech singularity - maybe architecture in a Matrix-type gestalt? Whatever it is, I'm loving it.

UncertaintyCrossing 14 Sep 2021 21:09

Another piece full of wonderful imagery and detail that paints a picture of a world so.. vibrant would be too upbeat of a word, but so full of life yet in the absence of life - whatever it is, it really is a delight to read. Another strong entry by this team, has my plus one again!

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But the time flies, irretrievable.

Maxyfran73 17 Sep 2021 05:10

The idea of this Bridge structure extending forever is really neat, and the image it creates is really good; the imagery this Post-singularity world builds is this team's forte, and this entry in turn does not disappoint.

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rumetzen 20 Sep 2021 00:05

Very very cool, reminds me a lot of manga like the end of Fire Punch and Biomega.