From the Mountain, Rage. Unfathomable Rage. / Discussion

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Doctor Pann 30 Sep 2021 03:51

Alrighty, I'm excited to post my first real story in a number of months! This is related to my other story called 'Salvation Rests at the River's Edge', which is why that article is linked in this one. Originally the River's Edge story was supposed to be a part of the River Canon, but seeing as how that never really ended up panning out, I decided I wanted to build this universe a little more. Who knows, maybe the Scripts of Ora will continue into its own little collection? I guess we'll see.

Now excuse my blabbing. I must extend a big thank you to (ThePianoMan1616) does not match any existing user name for his fantastic and insightful critique. He helped me polish this little thing up, and for that I'm grateful.

So… yeah. Hope you like my thing, and if you don't I'd love to know why. You don't have to, but it would help me improve for the next project.

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Snapdragon133 28 Oct 2021 02:29

I mean… who says this can't still be a part of river canon? Scripts of Ora is a good name for it….

But anyways seriously, this is super cool! I love the worldbuilding in this, especially the moon, super creative! The shift in perspective to the little girl really helped the eruption punch harder than it could've in the first perspective that was used. Really fun!