Re-(dis)orientation / Discussion

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DodoDevil 14 Oct 2021 15:01

First time taking a crack at posting on the Wanderers' Library. Big thanks to Ralliston and anyone else who looked at this for their feedback.

This is intended to be the first of 3(?) works in a series inspired by labyrinths, ways of experiencing mazes, and things one may encounter within them.

Image is in the public domain: http://hdl.handle.net/10934/RM0001.COLLECT.226912

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AnActualCrow 17 Oct 2021 20:32

This is excellent. Even on mobile, I didn't have any issues with the presentation of the article. Looking forward to the next entry!

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DodoDevil 18 Oct 2021 05:10

I'm glad you enjoyed it! The only difference on mobile is that, depending on one's screen size, the double-text sections may not line up 1:1.

Snapdragon133 03 Nov 2021 05:20

That split section was SO COOL. No doubt it was meant to be the highlight of the article and oh man did it deliver. I loved that. The other parts around it were well-written as well, I'm very intrigued as to what this (very creative version of) the minotaur plans for our speaker.

So excited to read more of this, when the time comes. A hearty +1!

Maxyfran73 08 Nov 2021 23:02

Ah, didn't realize you'd posted this, apologies. Anyhow, this is pretty damn good. The 'duality of the experience' is just so good: Love the split section so, so much. The whole trvel through the maze is awesome, really, but this part is what really sells one on the tale.

Like Snap, really excited to see what else is to come after. +1~

Hambleton 08 Nov 2021 23:24

Loved the formatting and the way the text in the main central section was closely tuned so that both sides physically matched while being diametrically opposed in sense. Looking forward to seeing more.

+1

LAN 2D 15 Jan 2022 12:08

This has been on my reading list for a while, but now I regret not having read it sooner. Your prose is stellar, every sentence feels interesting and purposeful. The descriptions of consciousness and the dual experience were the highlight for me, very interesting stuff.

Looking forward to reading what happens next in their journey through the maze…

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