A Suicide Note / Discussion

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(account deleted) 30 Oct 2015 02:03

I quite like this. The image of Kheneyelda only being visible as a stylized print was interesting. The idea of someone falling in love with a figure of propaganda (if that's the right term) is one that coincides with my own interests, but was genuinely something I had never seriously considered before.

If I had to make a complaint, it would be that the title seemed a bit over-dramatic and actually put me off of reading it for a while. However, it works splendidly in the context of the article. Hope to see more from you soon! +1

Researcher Brooks 02 Aug 2018 07:43

It’s a cold and it’s a broken Halilula

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Agent MacLeod 12 Jan 2019 00:41

And we're back!

I feel like this story suffers from a lack of context. Perhaps I'd understand better if I knew more about the prompt? The story reminded me a bit of the Netflix adaptation of Altered Carbon, in a good way. I'm personally a sucker for lost cause stories and last stand stories, and this is, despite its brevity, quite a good one. Certainly wouldn't bother me to see more of this world in order to get a better grasp on it.

Etinjat 06 Feb 2019 07:01

As an old saying goes," it just like a moth flying to flame to search for the light.And it is never afraid to be burned to death,dosn't it? "

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+ 黑月是否嚎叫？

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