Crit Request: We'll Face the Silence Together

This is splendid. I really enjoyed the tone and theme. I have little in the way of critique to offer other than to note that the narrator's uncertainty at the very start as to how the phenomenon began is slightly undone by the subsequent detail into which Sendale's partner's disappearance is then shown. There is a lot of (in-story) factual record to show and the narrator explores it all. It doesn't quite sit with the equivocated recollection of the opening sentence. A small issue, however. Really interesting work.

The Wanderers' Library

Fiction from another world.