The "you look like death" line got me. +1
I like this story, but the flow of it is a bit of a problem for me. It seems a little clunky. One moment we've got a dying Lover, the next we're at a bar, the next we're in some ethereal dream world, then we screech to a halt at the end of the story.
Biggest problem is this: Orcus as a character confuses me. Early on, he seems adverse to Lover and Warrior knowing he's Death's son, but then tells them he is at the end. And they just accept this. His personality is also concerning: Is he supposed to be a moody teenager? An analytical smartass? A son just wanting to prove his worth to a distant father? A nihilistic immortal who knows from experience that life is meaningless? A rebellious rulebreaker? I feel that all of these seem to be true, but none of them are leaned into enough. Maybe that's just my own interpretation. Obviously, I didn't write the work, and my character analysis is worth next to nothing.
Now the fun part: This is hilarious at times. Like, really, really funny. The character of Death might just be the best you've concocted. I cannot overstate this enough, but this story actually made me laugh. That's no small feat, friend! It's very well written. I didn't notice any SPaG problems or anything like that (though I'm not the best editor). Well done.
I do hope I wasn't too harsh. As good as this story already is, I just know it could be better.
All in all, you've earned my upvote, fellow Wanderer.