In Ink and Code / Discussion

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Luxaiko 23 Nov 2021 04:47

Once again I have come to introduce some new characters to the world of the Library.
This is just the start of a love story between an anxious cyber pirate and a prince from a world of sand and dunes that I hope you enjoy!

Thank you to Calibold, JakdragonX and DrGooday for their crit. Thank you to Dr Whitney does not match any existing user name for her image editing tips!
The image was taken and edited by me.

Last edited on 23 Nov 2021 04:53 by Luxaiko Show more

Snapdragon133 23 Nov 2021 05:23

This is cute! I really like the idea of a love story between such different characters, and this is a great start to it.

Small nitpick: generally, when referring to the Wanderers Library, Library is capitalized. Otherwise, I can’t wait to see this continued!

NotAnOligarch 23 Nov 2021 14:48

A centered title AND a centered rating box? That's really all I needed to see.

But in all seriousness, you did very well I think. Though not usually one for love stories, you held my attention the entire time. The characters, I can tell, have depth to them. All in all, something that I would definitely like to see more of. I can find no wrong in the progression of the story or the nitty-gritty stuff. Very well done!

You've earned my upvote. Good luck, fellow Wanderer.

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Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.

Maxyfran73 05 May 2022 03:11

I like this one; the characters here are cute. I wish there was more to it, but what's here is already pretty good.

+1