Draft Critique Request: Suset in Biwabik

Summary:

A story about a detective trying to piece together a string of killings carried out by a supernatural entity. Please not I am having issues with my 'tab' key so I can't indent paragraphs at the moment :/

Draft Critique Request: Suset in Biwabik

Idontworkhere 13 Jan 2022 18:55

Link to my sanbox page: [http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/i-do-not-in-fact-work-here]

Here's a little story I birthed over the course of a few weeks but have been hesitant to post. Any crit appreciated, don't worry about spelling or grammar too much, I'll clean that up myself when the time comes. :)))