Bloated and Stroked by the Tide / Discussion

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rumetzen 05 Feb 2022 10:11

I really dig this. The rhythm can feel a bit off at times but the imagery is very solid and I like the use of color to paint pictures.

Maxyfran73 05 Feb 2022 17:27

The imagery here is really good. Love it. Not a fan of the hidden text, but the poem itself is solid.

+1

Crow-Cat 09 Feb 2022 04:04

Are the double "ands" intentional?

Stygian Blue 21 Feb 2022 04:31

No they are not, thank you for catching that! I do not know how I missed it.

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What is life if not the contrast between what has been and what will become?