My coldposted entry for the Wing Two contest.
This is genuinely amazing, and one of the best things I've read in a while . The way you characterise the pair through prose - with barely any dialogue - is stellar, and so is the worldbuilding and descriptive imagery.
My favourite part was the list of locations that never seemed to end. A simple idea, but effective nonetheless.
Aw, goddammit Tufto. This shit rocks, another job well done from you.
Aw fuck, this is so good. The prose here is impeccable, and I really liked the jumps; at points it almost felt like even the story-telling changed with every jump. Finally, the story told alongside these was captivating. Just, amazing stuff all around.
Easy +1~
Fuck. Fuuuuuck.
The traces of White Suit in this are strong, but being who I am that just makes it strike an even stronger chord with me. I really don't have anything to say about this. It's just tremendously good and emotional and bittersweet while not really explaining or giving the reader an inch of ground. It's a glimpse into a world passing through the window. I really, really like it. Probably my favorite of the entries so far. Fantastic.
Motherfucker stop putting this out for free! Your writing deserves to make some magazine editor swoon.
+1
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