There's a really cool core concept here, extending the "home as body/organism" concept from Anatomy to a new angle, but the execution unfortunately feels pretty rough. The piece comes off as tonally conflicted, with the horror vibe it inherits from its inspirations clashing with things like the imagery of a "very confused stray dog". Don't get me wrong, that's a delightful funny bit of imagery on its own, but in this particular case I think it would have been good to commit more fully to either horror or comedic absurdity, so they don't trip each other up. Or, alternatively, expanding the piece could give both tones room to breathe or even play off each other.
Some of the word choices and prose also feels like it's taken pretty directly from Anatomy, not to the point of plagiarism or anything, but enough that it was obvious more or less immediately what this was inspired by(not helped by how iconic and memorable some of that prose is). Not that you can't try to emulate writing you like from other people to some extent, but describing a house as "hungry", "lonely", "bitter", and "unscrupulous" all in the same sentence is probably taking it a bit far. Certainly it would at least be worthwhile to credit Kitty Horrorshow in some respect.
So yeah, enough fun ideas and imagery for me not to downvote, but a bit too unfocused and unpolished for me to upvote.