To Look Up in a Forest of Giants / Discussion

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Martle 19 Apr 2022 15:17

I didnt really understand all the symbolism here, but still thought it was nice

Snapdragon133 25 Apr 2022 02:07

WORDS

GOOD WORDS

I loved the consistent use of similes/metaphors, plus this was just a cool story. +1

Maxyfran73 05 Jul 2023 12:20

Extremely solid story, dwarfing the reader in a way, which is very appropriate, considering the theme of the piece. While I can't say I fully understood the ending, it is nonetheless beautiful, and just, the entire piece, with this struggle in growth, this struggle with comparisons, this struggle with oneself… It's a really interesting message, and the way it's put into paper, through this forest, is marvelous.

Loved this piece. Really interesting journey. +1~

FleshMaddAvalon 30 May 2024 05:02

Truly to become one with n nature means stopping to become one with fhe roses.
Lovely words for a lovely idea. Scrumptious and moist like bog dirt. Mwah.

-Ava

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust