Sandbox link: http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/que-asi-sea.
Filed in the tab under the same name of the forum thread, 'The Lion Bleeds Stark Epiphanies'.
Memories of passionate days are cut short before the turn of the 20th century by the clacking of rifles—and a renewed conversation with an old lover turns feverish as a past premonition shows itself. It's gone through several rounds and critique from a external source, so its quite tuned up, but might still need a little more polish.
I'm up for anything, really, be it tone, plot, flow, SPaG, just would like a final pair of eyes to take a look over it before posting, in case I missed anything.
All the best.