West of Winnemucca / Discussion

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lzhoudidion 10 Aug 2022 19:27

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All taken by katieg93.
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I'll never be your beast of burden...my back is broad, but it's a-hurtin...

Thank you to Stygian Blue for taking a gander and giving feedback!

Two month long side project, had a lot of fun tinkering with rhythm, structure and setting. It's ready to spread its wings and fly.

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Snapdragon133 10 Aug 2022 19:46

I’m still quite bad at interpreting poems, but this one hits for me. I loved the rhythm you constructed

Rounderhouse 10 Aug 2022 19:54

Agreed with snap. My poem barometer works more on pure vibes than anything concrete and this is dripping with vibes.