Was wondering if you'd be so kind as to check out my Picture Palooza entry!
http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/the-non-oligarchy
Pretty medium read, I'd say?
Alrighty. Simple asks today.
- How's the theme?
- Do the characters make sense? Is Martin likeable? I fear he may come off as condescending.
- Is it good? Be honest.
- Does the picture show up alright, and is it big enough too make out the two clocks? Is it too big, do you think?
- Anything else?
- If any SPaG stuff jumps at you, or if any lines are confusing, scream at me.
Cool cool! Super excited about this contest.
Good luck to all else who enter!
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