the drill (cementhookreplica) / Discussion

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UncannyClown276 16 Dec 2022 00:24

thank you to floorboards and stygian blue (the people, not the things)

Stygian Blue 16 Dec 2022 00:27

Thank you so much, Stygian Blue and Clown! Blue: your feedback was fantastic and really helped this poem develop… but it was just not as good as mine! I think we both know that. Good working with you on this though!

As always, Clown, thanks for letting me review this. Was fun!

-Floorboards

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What is life if not the contrast between what has been and what will become?

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FLOORBOARDS 16 Dec 2022 00:37

Thank you so much, FLOORBOARDS and Clown!

I actually enjoy the feeling of metal tools in my mouths. When I chew on my dentist’s pincers, I feel like I’m part of the hive again!

-Stygian Blue

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FLOORBOARDS 16 Dec 2022 00:26

Looking excellent! I admire your imagery and emotion, just like I said during critique.

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NotAnOligarch 16 Dec 2022 15:56

i hate dentistry

funny, +1

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Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.

SilverScribbles 16 Dec 2022 16:15

Oh God. This reminds me of the time my (terrible) dentist drilled my cavities… But numbed my teeth the wrong way-

+1

Flinty_me 02 Feb 2023 21:09

I didn't even realize that this was about dentistry until later. I can taste the novocaine already.