Three things you ought to know/understand / Discussion

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FLOORBOARDS 10 Feb 2023 23:02

Weird combination of things. Coldposted.

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meltedbee 11 Feb 2023 03:06

I feel like there's something more here, something quite deep. I cannot for the life of me figure out what it is. 10/10.

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radiance, glorious and cold and blistering all at once, like a star behind the eyes

FLOORBOARDS 11 Feb 2023 03:27

Haha, I’m glad you like it! I don’t know if I’d call my intended meaning deep, but I won’t explain my thought process publicly — keeps the mystery!

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AmbroseArietes 11 Feb 2023 03:39

I’ll be pondering this little poem(?) for days (maybe an exaggeration, but whatever). The layout of it is very pleasing, and something about it just piqued my curiosity.

Fun! :)

+1.

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FLOORBOARDS 11 Feb 2023 03:56

Haha, I’m glad it’s stuck with you already! 😭 This is sort of a poem, I guess? It’s inspired by the schizoanalysis genre of essays, though a bit more toned down.

I’m glad you enjoyed the format, and I’m even more glad it’s making you think a little. Means a whole lot to me.

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NotAnOligarch 13 Feb 2023 14:56

I like this very much! A nice little thing of poems, very deep, very cool. Ponderous.
I am, however, left wondering why the table of contents was included for such a short peice? It seems out of place imo.
This doesn't degrade the work at all its just an odd choice.
WELL DONE, +1

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Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.

FLOORBOARDS 15 Feb 2023 17:27

Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and I hope you liked pondering it, haha. As for the table of contents, I included it because it serves a thematic purpose, not a technical purpose — it's metaphorical, for however you want to interpret it.

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