Come Forth from the Garden of Beginnings / Discussion

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In the Garden of Beginnings, they lived in peace.

AmbroseArietes 10 Feb 2023 23:30

Part 1 of my collab with DigitalPrincess234.

Introducing my take on the serpent, Praesens (any/all, sorry if the pronoun jumping confused anyone)

No idea how long this series be in its entirety but this is, certainly, a beginning.

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Ambrose Arietes

Re: In the Garden of Beginnings, they lived in peace.

DigitalPrincess234 11 Feb 2023 00:29

Uh. Hi.

This was fun to write. I mainly made sure Locus was doing her thing and tried to help with white room syndrome. This was kinda weird to write at first because the tense is not what I’m used to. (I think we’re in 3rd person omniscient? Very scary. Never been there before.) But it got a little easier. (I’m so glad we didn’t write this in google docs, editing the sandbox page was chaos enough!)

Thank you for taking time to read our story. We both put a lot of love into it and it’s grown so much from where we started!

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By ourselves, we’re no one. It’s when other people look at us and see someone— that’s the moment we each start to exist.

Maxyfran73 30 Jul 2024 05:38

Not sure if I liked how abrupt the ending came about, but the rest is solid gold. What a way to introduce this beautiful, soon-to-change and warp world, and the characters within it. Loved it. Easy +1~

Fantastic

weslumundo 17 Feb 2026 12:17

Hi, I really like this and want to read more. I know its a little late lol, but is there a page or something that links to anymore stories in this cannon?