written on the back of a prescription for 200ml testosterone / Discussion

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NotAnOligarch 27 Feb 2023 15:27

Cool poem!
Good at expressing the idea even to someone who can not relate to the message.
Very eloquent, very well done. +1

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Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.

UncannyClown276 02 Mar 2023 03:17

the last line is unnecessary; i got the idea from the line directly preceding it, which i think would be a stronger ending.

that said, upvoted.