this is gorgeous. the imagery throughout is serene, and everything is tinged with just the right amount of melancholy. i'm not sure how i feel about connecting a piece on here to an scp work so strongly, but even if i lacked the context from lily's proposal i would still find a lot to appreciate here.
all that said, the title feels kind of stock and unimpressive. i don't think you're allowed to change it at this point, but a title that better represents the imagery and overall vibe of the piece would be something to consider after the contest ends. regardless, upvoted enthusiastically.
edit: this new title is much better.