Big thanks to all my critters!
StrangerSwing for help figuring out pacing, and some more meta-narrative work.
AstersQuill for help with SPaG, and character consistency.
cafecow for overview, and some pacing notes.
DreamerOfTheOpenEyes for overview and other general notes.
This is the second installment in the Ralph-verse, so let me know if this holds up to the original. I'm not sure how many of these I can realistically make, but they're a blast to write. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy!
