a period piece / Discussion

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Author's note

fora-mina 16 Jun 2023 00:17

Much thanks to Spoddetman for looking this over!

A/N: I started typing this up yesterday at 11 pm and finished today in the afternoon. I've noticed a lack of period literature so this is kind of a contribution to that. End period stigma!!

Last edited on 18 Nov 2023 01:57 by fora-mina Show more

FleshMaddAvalon 17 Jun 2023 20:30

This is good! I don't have periods, and have no intention to ever have one, but I feel this piece speaks to a primal feeling that you express beautifully within it. Your word choice brings across the feelings and emotions excellently. The small blurb at the end is a perfect end cap.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

fora-mina 22 Jun 2023 16:34

Omg thank you so much