Apologies, but I didn't end up liking this one that much. The poem is about love, but it doesn't really say anything unique about it. When I read a poem, I'm looking to be challenged or to create a connection with the poet. I don't believe this says anything about you. I'd encourage you to pursue more unique word-choices as well. Additionally, I'd also encourage you to lean much farther into the haiku stuff. You mention haikus at the end but the fact that the poem is made of haikus doesn't have much of an effect on the poem's words or message. It feels like a half-formed idea that could be advanced into something really cool if more work was put in