I FINALLY GOT TO INFODUMP THE ICEBERG TIP OF MY OVERLY DETAILED AND HIGHLY BIOLOGICALLY AND MECHANICALLY INNACCURATE LORE SURROUNDING AUGMENTATION METHODS, CRY YOUR TEARS OUT OF WHATEVER VALVES OR PORES OR ORIFICES YOU HAVE AVAILABLE
Thank you to slazzechofe for critting this despite, uh, not having read parts one, two, three, four and five because I hadn't posted the part one rewrite yet. And they revealed some things about my writing I didn't realise myself, which I found very entertaining (like the way my comma use matches how people naturally speak and not how you should use commas).