Credit where undoubtedly due to lzhoudidion for the crit!! It wouldn't be the same without their invaluable input. Really, really lucky to have one of the greatest poets of our time (only maybe a slight exaggeration) help me out on this one, which I happen to be quite proud of. Not much else to say about it, may it join the growing roster of 'poems' I've added unsanctimoniously to my body of work. That being an odd pile of half-witted papers strewn messily about the cluttered office of my brain.
Thanks for reading!
—oli.
Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.
