Crit Request: Microhumanities

Summary:

A brief meditation on the good in life, I suppose.

Crit Request: Microhumanities

jvml 06 Sep 2023 02:17

Hello! I haven't done this in a while; it feels nice to be back.

Here I have a poem I wrote over the course of today in two parts, vaguely about little things in my life that capture my awe and keep me going. I am particularly fond of how I enjambed the lines, but that's just me.

General crit would be nice; I don't really have any specific points to make or questions to ask.

Without further ado, the draft is here.

Re: Crit Request: Microhumanities

Heather Rose Brown 07 Oct 2023 01:53

I never heard of microhumanities, but it's definitely an intriguing concept. I had some difficulty making sense of some of what you wrote, but that may be at least partly do to me being sleepy. I may give this another try when I'm more awake.