Crit Request: In the Beginning - a Tree's Story

Crit Request: In the Beginning - a Tree's Story

Heather Rose Brown 06 Oct 2023 17:14

I'm so excited about joining the Wanderer's Library! I've posted a story in my sandbox at http://wanderers-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/heather-rose-s-creative-corner called "In the Beginning - a Tree's Story". Would someone be able to take a look at my story, and let me know if it looks okay to post? If I messed up anything, please let me know. Thank you!

Re: Crit Request: In the Beginning - a Tree's Story

Skipmeister 07 Oct 2023 03:39

Hello!

This is my first time reviewing a work-in-progress on the Wanderer's Library in a while now, but I have to say, I loved this! The story feels very "Wanderer's Library", and you write it very well! Very true to what someone might imagine a tree might say, it has a very imaginative tone to it.

Given that this is for crit, my only notes would be a couple of spelling and grammar errors, but that's easy enough to fix on a proofread. I'll also ask if all of the references to leaves are meant to be capitalised, because some are and some aren't.

But overall, great story, can't wait to see it posted!

- Skipmeister

Re: Crit Request: In the Beginning - a Tree's Story

Heather Rose Brown 07 Oct 2023 12:36

I'm glad this story fits in with the feel for Wanderer's Library! Leaves were supposed to be capitalized, so I'll go back and fix them. I'll do my best to weed out the spelling and grammatical errors too. Thanks for the crit!