(Crit Request) Cartesian Dualism
Howdy! Something I've come to realize is that my writing heavily exists in the physical, so this piece was a bit of a double challenge: really dig into physical sensations and do something… less physical (I honestly don't know what to call it.) Both sides tend to step into the others' territory, but I'm not displeased with the bleed over, but if you disagree please say so.
This will utilize listpages, but I wanted to worry about crit before I worried about that.
Any and all thoughts are appreciated, thank you!
Also, I feel obliged to give a heads up for: detailed violence, some racism, and implied attempted rape.