I've come to realize that a lot of my writing exists in the realm of the literal and physical, so this piece was a dual challenge: dive deeper into physical sensation and do something more… mind? Abstract? Less literal? I dunno what to call it. A nightmare to work with at times, but worth it, I think.
A thank you is in order to LAN 2D who discussed formatting with me and some other minor things, and to
Linkinbrick for their crit.
This is an addition I didn't put in 'til now but it should have been in earlier, just didn't think to say it. An additional thank you is in order to Din-Bidor and
Maxyfran73 from whom I stole the code for the "two stories side-by-side" thing and which inspired me to do something with it 'cause I thought it was interesting.