Still Life with Silicon / Discussion

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zipzipskins 17 Dec 2023 05:33

my second one.

brain

huge thanks to meltedbee for looking this over.

thanks also to all the authors who built this fascinating and fun canon. i could not have created this without your inspiration.

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Onward, to Phoenix!

Spoddetman 17 Dec 2023 12:09

This piece was late to the party, but was still the life of it. It seamlessly integrates itself into the setting, building off our collective worldbuilding and catapulting itself to new heights with your prose, equal parts witty and horrifying. Bravo.

Neuron-frying +1.

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FleshMaddAvalon 17 Dec 2023 19:25

Eats mmm yummy

I love second person dearly, and this is an amazing demonstration of the capability of the perspective. It's immersive, graphic but not explosively so, immersive and indicative. Amazing piece.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

Snapdragon133 19 Jan 2024 04:16

Auwguagguwuauwguuaugwa gross! This is a pretty solid TitanClash. Excuse the pun, but it feels like it's really trying to capture the Core of the canon, the moral failings that paved the way to many of the other stories. Conceptually, it's definitely a simple look at climbing the corporate ladder but the language used is really good that it sells it multiple times over. Also physically picking up and moving a rival's location with titans is insane and thinking so outside of the box, so props for that

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